In the following video, you will complete practice exercises on unity and coherence. The exercises are below. The video will offer guidance in completing the practice and the answers.
A paragraph has unity when all sentences directly support the topic sentence. To make your paragraph coherent you have to use transition signals to show how the idea is related to the next. The following exercise will help you develop your ability to recognize unity and coherence in paragraphs.
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In the following paragraph, there is a sentence that doesn’t add to the unity of the paragraph. Select the sentence below that doesn’t belong.
The following paragraph doesn’t have the element of unity because it contains one sentence that does not directly support the topic sentence. Pause the video, observe the paragraph, and identify the sentence that would not contribute to the unity of a paragraph. Resume your video when you are ready!
“The convenience and economy of small cars account for their popularity. They are easy to park quickly and take smaller parking spaces. Small cars are also a means of conserving energy because they use less gas than big cars. Small cars are inconvenient and uncomfortable on long trips, however, because of their limited passenger and trunk space. They are also more economical to operate and maintain, and they cost less. Because of these advantages, the next car I buy is going to be an Econo-Midget” (Oshima & Hogue:1981).
Fill in the missing transition words using the following choices: otherwise, on the contrary, also, finally, in the first place, in addition
Why I Don’t Make My Bed
Ever since I moved into my own apartment last fall, I have gotten out of the habit of making my bed–except on Fridays, of course, when I change the sheets. Although some people may think that I am a slob, I have some sound reasons for breaking the bed-making habit. , I am not concerned about maintaining a tidy bedroom because no one except me ever ventures in there. If there is ever a fire inspection or a surprise date, I suppose I can dash in there to fluff up the pillow and slap on a spread. , I am not bothered. , I find nothing uncomfortable about crawling into a rumpled mass of sheets and blankets. , I enjoy poking out a cozy space for myself before drifting off to sleep. , I think that a tightly made bed is downright uncomfortable: entering one makes me feel like a loaf of bread being wrapped and sealed. , and most importantly, I think bed-making is an awful way to waste time in the morning. I would rather spend those precious minutes checking my email or feeding the cat than tucking in corners or snapping the spread.
You will find additional practice with unity and coherence here.